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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Feb 1, 2011 8:33:39 GMT -5
Any feedback, as always, would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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Niles Markie
New Pride Poster
If money's the motive, I'm so suspect.
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Post by Niles Markie on Feb 2, 2011 22:48:48 GMT -5
Damn depressing read. Damn depressing. Luckily for me, that's exactly the type of thing I wanted to read tonight. I wanted to read a nice, painful beat-down of self-infliction sort of something and damn if you did not deliver it with the consistency of a man in the Major Leagues hitting a home-run. I am not going to recommend this to anyone who doesn't want to read something of a downer. However... To you sir.
Bravo for this compelling piece of human pain.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Feb 2, 2011 23:10:23 GMT -5
I... can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not, hah.
But in any case, thank you for the feedback.
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Niles Markie
New Pride Poster
If money's the motive, I'm so suspect.
Posts: 8
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Post by Niles Markie on Feb 2, 2011 23:21:43 GMT -5
I'm being serious, promise. No dickery here. It was a truly entertaining read, incredibly depressing.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Feb 2, 2011 23:28:10 GMT -5
Thanks, than. And yeah, Galen's not exactly a happy character. Anything you feel I could improve upon?
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Post by Trav McBang! on Feb 3, 2011 14:17:01 GMT -5
Dear Cori, A man in the major leagues hitting a home run isn't consistent. >_> Love, A sports fan
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