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Feb 5, 2011 10:57:43 GMT -5
Post by chriswilliams on Feb 5, 2011 10:57:43 GMT -5
Go nuts. Also, sorry I haven't been able to do some feedback for you guys this past week, I've been terribly busy and clearly haven't been around much. But I will definitely be trying my best to get to the feedback for the next show. I like reading your guys' material, and I hope you enjoy reading mine. Fire away!
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Feb 5, 2011 12:14:34 GMT -5
Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Feb 5, 2011 12:14:34 GMT -5
Okay. *Hits you*
No, but really, good roleplay, nice content, not too overdone and nice subversion of expectations at the end.. but one thing.
NO
CENTERED
TEXT.
It's like cancer on the eyelids... gah.
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Feb 5, 2011 12:24:10 GMT -5
Post by chriswilliams on Feb 5, 2011 12:24:10 GMT -5
See, I've always done centered text while fedding, and literally stopped before writing my first RP here because I saw your comment earlier about centered text... but it just feels better to me if I center it. I dunno, I might go back to left-align the next RP. Thanks for the feedback, tho! Anything you think could use some improvement?
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Feb 5, 2011 13:13:34 GMT -5
Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Feb 5, 2011 13:13:34 GMT -5
Maybe a bit of pacing. There seems to be some spots that go a bit slower and kindof drag down the roleplay - along with some parts that seem like they might be interesting if they were longer and expressed upon a bit more.
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