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Post by rich on Nov 22, 2010 14:29:41 GMT -5
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Post by rich on Nov 23, 2010 0:04:37 GMT -5
Not even one thought?
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Storm
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Post by Storm on Nov 23, 2010 8:02:04 GMT -5
Patience, friend.
Anyway, my major criticism may be born of personal preference, but I'd avoid the "run down" RPs where you move through a list of opponents, talk a bit of trash, move on to the next one, etc. It's a bit too generic for my taste, and I think you'd be better off if you could weave that kind of direct match relevance into a more overarching theme/story/whatever.
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Post by ripjamal on Nov 23, 2010 13:16:58 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with using the art of the basic wrestling promo, not enough people do that anymore IMO.
I liked it, I got a good feel for Rich's character. The match relevance was all there and the transition from the tour to talking about the match was well executed. It didn't drag on too long and covered pretty much everything it needed to. A strong RP IMO.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Nov 23, 2010 13:29:05 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with using the art of the basic wrestling promo, not enough people do that anymore IMO. I liked it, I got a good feel for Rich's character. The match relevance was all there and the transition from the tour to talking about the match was well executed. It didn't drag on too long and covered pretty much everything it needed to. A strong RP IMO. Dear Rich, Take Rob's words with a grain of salt. This moron had Alex Sinclair beat Jeff Charisma... twice. |
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Post by ripjamal on Nov 23, 2010 14:19:58 GMT -5
Dear Trav,
Please stfu and remove your penis from Jeff Charisma's anus.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Nov 23, 2010 14:24:27 GMT -5
Dear Rob,
I'm telling Sterling!
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Post by Storm on Nov 23, 2010 14:27:49 GMT -5
Dear Trav, Please stfu and remove your penis from Jeff Charisma's anus. Aww, that's cute, you think Trav is the man. >_> |
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Post by rich on Nov 24, 2010 0:13:42 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with using the art of the basic wrestling promo, not enough people do that anymore IMO. I was taught in the old school. 2001 FTW. |
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Post by Obscene on Nov 26, 2010 16:48:50 GMT -5
Patience, friend. Anyway, my major criticism may be born of personal preference, but I'd avoid the "run down" RPs where you move through a list of opponents, talk a bit of trash, move on to the next one, etc. It's a bit too generic for my taste, and I think you'd be better off if you could weave that kind of direct match relevance into a more overarching theme/story/whatever. Run downs can work if you've got the quality to back it up, which Rich does. Agree with the second point though. But again, you can get away with not having a story arc if your wrestler's got a great character. It shouldn't really count against you if your RPs have little relevance to each other, although it does help to fuel your writing. |
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