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Post by rich on Dec 3, 2010 2:03:30 GMT -5
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Post by Chris Strike on Dec 3, 2010 2:58:12 GMT -5
One good paragraph that actually focused on your match was well-done enough - from berating Beagles and CK to your focus on this thing you got going with Rob & Jim.
That's really the only good feedback I have though and so, I'll keep it at that.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 3, 2010 3:05:13 GMT -5
Am I allowed to leave honest feedback? Or would that upset you?
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Post by rich on Dec 3, 2010 3:05:41 GMT -5
Try me.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 3, 2010 3:08:10 GMT -5
However, the first post in this topic made me chuckle...you're already in a main event, man.  |
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Post by rich on Dec 3, 2010 3:13:17 GMT -5
I do not see a connection between the supposed OOC issues and my role play for this weeks e-fed wrestling card. This thread was posted for feedback, and I will not further respond to anyones (yours, or others) comments on this topic. I will read them all and make note of opinions, but I will be continuing the OOC blackout that I (as well as many others have and more probably will) instituted for myself.
-RM
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 3, 2010 3:16:00 GMT -5
Oops, I hit modify instead of quote...my bad. See above post for what I meant to say here. >_<
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X
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Post by X on Dec 3, 2010 4:20:55 GMT -5
I do not see a connection between the supposed OOC issues and my role play for this weeks e-fed wrestling card. This thread was posted for feedback, and I will not further respond to anyones (yours, or others) comments on this topic. I will read them all and make note of opinions, but I will be continuing the OOC blackout that I (as well as many others have and more probably will) instituted for myself. -RM   Come on... it's getting old.
Anyway,
I enjoyed the rp for the most part. The segments where you spoke of your upcoming match were prime stuff. I wish you had devoted more than 1 paragraph to it though. Other than that, your rp lost me. To the newer reader, like myself, we would have a hard time understanding the "angles" you spoke of during the story segment. It left me wondering, "is he breaking character or is this a past feud that I am unaware of?"
I hope I made sense. I am the shittiest reviewer. If you stuck to your match more and less on the rest, that rp would have been golden. Keep on the good fight, man. |
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Post by Josh Eagles on Dec 3, 2010 13:23:15 GMT -5
Honestly I really liked it. I read it twice over to make sure I caught everything, but I guess because I've known you for a while and the character of Rich Morrison is was much easier to get a lot of the things you were saying. I felt having old Rich looking back was a really fresh take on things and I got where you were going with it not being about wrestling anymore and pulling the classic Morrison angle.
IMO it was a very decent role play presented in a fresh way and it did something that a lot of other people have problems doing and that is giving your opponent great material to build off of. I know every person should be able to write without their opponent but giving someone more so in a tag match something to feed off of is great. I'd say very well done Rich and I hope as time goes on your angles and what not can become more recognized by the people who haven't read your stuff as long.
A SIDE NOTE: Just to give it a critique, I agree that one or two more little bits on CK and Myself would have been good because normally you have good stuff to say.
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Come on... it's getting old.
