Back in Action?

[Josh Eagles]

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I don't believe I've done one of these since I got here and I have honestly felt that the past few weeks I've been stale and barely squeaking by and letting a lot of people down. I really tried to bring my A game out this week but want some feedback on what I can fix.

Please for anyone who gives any kind of compliment also give me some constructive feedback on something I can improve on as well.

[rich]

Loved it, honestly. You said my characters old last name a few times. Other than that, it was great. I enjoyed it. This week is going to be a great show.

-RM

[Josh Eagles]

LOL it's because you still sign -RM at the end of your posts!!! I'll go back and change that!

[rich]

RM is actually my name, I stopped using it for e-feds though when I was at a job interview and was presented with questions regarding my presence online.

[Josh Eagles]

Dec 3, 2010 14:45:28 GMT -5 @rich said:

RM is actually my name, I stopped using it for e-feds though when I was at a job interview and was presented with questions regarding my presence online.

Likely a good call then!!!

[Trav McBang!]

Dec 3, 2010 14:45:28 GMT -5 @rich said:

RM is actually my name, I stopped using it for e-feds though when I was at a job interview and was presented with questions regarding my presence online.

Wow, man. That would be a little awkward. Thankfully my last name is too lame to even consider using or I might've been in the same boat some day.

[Obscene]

That, Josh, is why you are the champ.

You have this uncanny ability to write a ton of text, almost all of it match relevant, and not repeat yourself, or lapse into anything boring or uninteresting. As for improvement, I can't think of anything really. Keep doing what you're doing.