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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 4, 2010 9:31:32 GMT -5
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Post by Obscene on Dec 4, 2010 9:47:14 GMT -5
That was epic, and not just because of the music.
9/10
Only complaint would be the orange was a little hard to read.
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Post by Josh Eagles on Dec 4, 2010 14:18:36 GMT -5
I thought the orange was fine, I had troubles with the blue. But alas that's minor stuff. The rp was solid I'd say up among the best that I've read from you CK. Personally I am not a fan of the constant swearing and sex and what not just because it's a family show and I doubt it would ever be 'aired' but at the same time it's your character and I can suspend disbelief.
If anything I would say in the future I'd like to see CK get a little deeper into his opponents and his feelings just to get a deeper sense of CK then the surface stuff of being a bad ass. That's just me wanting to learn more CK ... other then that, very well written.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 4, 2010 14:23:48 GMT -5
Man, I hope the contents of RPs aren't aired...I had a Rwandan genocide scene and Delikado has robotic sexual battle tanks!  |
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 4, 2010 14:40:51 GMT -5
btw, your last two RPs both reminded me why I love CK. It's nice to see you REALLY back instead of just being around for the sake of being around. I'm enjoying it much. <3
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Post by Josh Eagles on Dec 4, 2010 17:15:48 GMT -5
btw, your last two RPs both reminded me why I love CK. It's nice to see you REALLY back instead of just being around for the sake of being around. I'm enjoying it much. <3 Agreed, I am looking forward to Winter Warfare!! The 3rd consecutive all Canadian main event, just saying... |
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Post by Josh Eagles on Dec 17, 2010 12:58:21 GMT -5
Liked it, showed a side of CK we never really see and get some personality depth. Feel it built your character and showed some motivation for the match. I think you could have elaborated a little more on CK's need to win and expand into stuff between Eagles/CK and really went over the top ... but the lack of on screen sex and the depth of character made this a real improvement in my eyes. One of your best.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 17, 2010 13:10:52 GMT -5
He's tryin' 2 butter u up, Crissy! Don't fall for teh MINDGAMES
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Post by Josh Eagles on Dec 17, 2010 13:18:35 GMT -5
Butter him? If I was doing that I wouldn't have given constructive critizm. I want his 'A' game or else winning this match feels more hollow. I want this match to be a close call a real neckbreaker.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 17, 2010 13:21:25 GMT -5
I was jesting, Joshy.  This main event's shaping up pretty well so far. I was telling Cris earlier that it was nice to see the facade and maschismo stripped from CK and to see the kind of road that brought him to where he is today. |
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Post by ripjamal on Dec 18, 2010 9:29:26 GMT -5
Probably the best RP I've ever read by you, Cris, and it's actually hard to think of a time I've seen the whole flashback deal used better in an RP. The transitions from scene to scene were pretty much flawless, and it's really putting together a whole feel of this being CK's destiny to win the Valiant title. Honestly, just scrolling down it looks like a long RP, but it felt like I was reading for no time at all, it just flowed.
Great RP, mate. Looking forward to your second, but based on that alone you have a real chance here.
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Post by Trav McBang! on Dec 18, 2010 13:01:50 GMT -5
Absolutely adored the Delikado cameo and how it tied into CK's current situation with the bottle of champagne. The raging CK after RotK made me laugh because of how similar my next RP is gonna be to that. Just a solid two pieces that combine to show the journey of Christian Kane to this point...good luck, Crissy.
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Post by ripjamal on Dec 18, 2010 15:12:51 GMT -5
Not much to say that Trav didn't. You followed the first RP perfectly and put up a great set of RPs. Definitely worthy of winning the title if it goes down that way.
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Post by Josh Eagles on Dec 18, 2010 15:22:15 GMT -5
That was amazing CK and truly inspiring. I'm just on lunch right now and get back at 7 and will be putting up my 2nd. Let me say it;s been a true honor and this will be the match of the year RP wise (don't mean to sound arrogant lol) and I'm proud to work with you.
Good Luck.
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Post by Chris Strike on Dec 18, 2010 18:52:39 GMT -5
After reading both pieces, I feel like I have a far better understanding of Christian Kane as a character and what it means to him to finally break through the glass ceiling and become Valiant champion.
Beyond amazing stuff Crissy. I'm rooting for you, mate. <3
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This main event's shaping up pretty well so far. I was telling Cris earlier that it was nice to see the facade and maschismo stripped from CK and to see the kind of road that brought him to where he is today.
