Feeback for Silence

[Silence]

So here's a link to my rp for Winter Warfare. It's been kind of hard to get into this character and the current feud but I think I did a decent job with this rp. I'd appreciate if people would let me know what they think and give any advice they may have.

www.pridewrestling22.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=supershowroleplays&thread=1777

[Josh Eagles]

I liked it. I haven't had the time to read much of your work but I thought this was a good start. At first I didn't like Silence being locked up because most people destroy the roster why would this one guy be locked up? But then I saw the interaction of it being 'The Voice' warping his mind and I really got into it. To me it does appear that Voice is an evil antagonist who has taken a possibly kind spirit and made him do things against his will.

Advise: I think some formatting to make the rp easier to read would be cool and maybe starting to see a little more emotion from Silence. I'd like to see emotional interaction with The Voice or even just his surroundings to make up for the lack of speaking ... overall it's a hard character and your doing well.

[Silence]

Thanks Josh, I really appreciate it. And don't worry, you guys will be seeing plenty of emotion from Silence in the coming months. About the formatting though, what would you suggest?

[Josh Eagles]

Either some color for when they are talking or possibly bolding the non talking parts. When it's all white with just quotation marks like that I find it a little harder to read. Just something to make it a little easier to read is all.

[Silence]

Ahh, ya I can definitely do that. Thank you for pointing that out to me.