So, how am I driving?

[Eddie Nash]

So, I've been here for a few weeks now. Beat out a few good roleplay's, gone undefeated and though my work is showing that I'm apparently impressing people (I hope) up top I'd like to ask my co-writers here at KoP for a little bit of your time for your opinions on not my promo's but on the character.

1. How is the Eddie Nash character working for you as the reader? Yay or Nay on the Biker gimmick,
Is Eddie Nash, the broken hero on the path of redemption, is he believable? Can you imagine this happening IRL? And what of the biker gimmick?

2. The Mikey Hughes Perspective
In a bid to do something different with my writing most of my roleplay's come from the perspective of the comedy foil, Mikey Hughes. I realized that sometimes the descriptive writing of a roleplay can be fucking painful to read and so I try to make it more amusing to appeal to the reader. Is it working?

3. Can you see this character going far?
And if so, how far? Do you see a possibility that Ed may be the next big face of KoP (shudder the thought), or a curtain jerker for generations?


Any side-criticisms and points are welcome. I look forward to hearing what you all have to say. Pull no punches guys and gals, I'm tough.

[Esix Cordero]

After reading your last RP (which was very good by the way) I get the feeling that our characters would mesh really well if we were in a feud. I think you have potential to be one of the top faces here in KoP. As for the gimmick, I think your character goes deeper than just a biker, which is good for a long lasting character. Eddie has a solid foundation that he gets from being a biker - dedication, toughness, and respect. Those are things that make for a very credible face.

Also I'm trying to do the same thing with Skeeter as you are with Mikey. I could see them two being friends while Ed and Esix duke it out >_>

[Dru Tha Merc]

I <3 Biker Gimmicks ever since The Undertaker rode around on a motorcycle. Therefore I am probably biased when I say it is more then just a little entertaining and lovely to see a good guy sort of Biker who has a believable reason to be a good guy.

Nash could very well be the next big face of KoP, if the Pride Cup victory is any indication, and it's not just the character, but how you portray him. You are impressing people, to say the least, and I don't have much to complain about in your writing.

What I will say though, would make an interesting heel turn if you ever do it in the future is... You write Nash almost too well to do a heel turn in just one promo. I think a heel promo from Nash would be more like, him giving his usual epic speech to the fans, but then backstage, someone catches him on tape cursing the people who he acts as though they are his family, or something to the matter.

That's how I imagine a Nash heel turn, but I assume you got aces up your sleeve in case you ever turn bad guy.