Daevin Feedback

[Daevin Dushane]

For the first couple of weeks I am going to be looking for some feedback. I am trying to build a character that people fall in love with and hopefully a storyline people enjoy reading. It's probably hard to see where I am going from the get go but I'd love any feed back that I can get.

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[Josh Eagles]

Solid. This is more of a bump because I've been told in the past I am too harsh on debut rp's ... but I thought it was solid.