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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 17, 2011 14:43:09 GMT -5
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Post by chriswilliams on Jan 17, 2011 16:40:57 GMT -5
Honestly dude, that whole "I'm gonna promise my dead friend that I'll be the best for them"... SO GENERIC!  Nah, all kidding aside, another fantastic glimpse into Ronan's history, followed up with very solid dialogue about your match ahead. I feel like to critique this promo at all, I need to just get on your level first... the only thing that catches me a little off is the pure novel style of the RP. However, that is simply a formatting thing, and a total opinion at that, as I know plenty who swear by writing in that form. Great RP, man |
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Adam Abel
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Former PWF World Heavyweight Champion & 2009 Advent Cup Champion
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Post by Adam Abel on Jan 21, 2011 13:51:36 GMT -5
You making moves on my sister boy?  ? That was a really good promo. One thing that sorta bothered me is all the italic, but I guess 85% of mine are the same way so maybe I should complain to myself as well! Great work, really nice emotion showed as well! Kinda pulled the curtain back on Galen there. |
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Nah, all kidding aside, another fantastic glimpse into Ronan's history, followed up with very solid dialogue about your match ahead. I feel like to critique this promo at all, I need to just get on your level first... the only thing that catches me a little off is the pure novel style of the RP. However, that is simply a formatting thing, and a total opinion at that, as I know plenty who swear by writing in that form.
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