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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 24, 2011 14:08:37 GMT -5
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Post by Dru Tha Merc on Jan 27, 2011 22:31:29 GMT -5
That promo was incorrigible my friend. You have such a stunning amount of detail that I have no complaints about it. Pure detail. Everything he's thinking, he's musing, he acts and snarls and hisses. You paint a beautiful landscape, that is to say the least. One thing I have to ask though is, about a little bit of confusion. We are talking about a man who left his pregnant ex-fiancee but misses her. Can we sort of delve more into that in the future? It seems strange to me that a man who is a Tweener... Well no, it makes sense, but I suppose I'm trying to figure out why. Who would miss their pregnant ex-fiancee if they were evil enough to leave them in the first place? I would surmise it's meant to show us that he still has a soft spot for her, but something about it seems forced in the otherwise dastardly self-respecting ego has a soft spot. Then again, he's a tweener. Otherwise, powerful, ridiculously powerful promo. I am not trying to verbally suck your dick when I say with all earnest, I'm not sure me writing at my best would even see you at your best... And of course if this is your worst... ...I am still not sure.
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Post by "The Divine Chaos" Galen Ronan on Jan 27, 2011 23:30:07 GMT -5
One thing I have to ask though is, about a little bit of confusion. We are talking about a man who left his pregnant ex-fiancee but misses her. Can we sort of delve more into that in the future? It seems strange to me that a man who is a Tweener... Well no, it makes sense, but I suppose I'm trying to figure out why. Who would miss their pregnant ex-fiancee if they were evil enough to leave them in the first place? I would surmise it's meant to show us that he still has a soft spot for her, but something about it seems forced in the otherwise dastardly self-respecting ego has a soft spot. Then again, he's a tweener. Galen's very conflicted by his want/need for love and his obsession with victory - the whole idea being that the latter causes the complete loss of the people and things that satisfy the former. Self-destructive obsession with victory, basically, and his girlfriend was going to 'hold him back' in his view by preventing him from touring and such as much as he wanted to - so he broke up with her, and hates himself for it because he does still love her. If that still doesn't make any sense, well... sorry. I tried.
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Post by Dru Tha Merc on Jan 28, 2011 1:52:47 GMT -5
Yeah, I think I get it now. I appreciate it.
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Adam Abel
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Former PWF World Heavyweight Champion & 2009 Advent Cup Champion
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Post by Adam Abel on Jan 29, 2011 20:32:50 GMT -5
Um...That was awesome. Nuff said.
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