Eagles Tower

[Josh Eagles]

Part One is up, titled 'Pain'.

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I don't often do this, but this is a slightly well different avenue or approach then what I normally take. So wanted some thoughts on what people thought.

[Kid Flanagan]

I liked it, however knowing the dark side of Flap....I think Josh is fucked!

[tommyhargrove]

I enjoy your work, I liked the way you took bits and pieces of each guy in the match and integrated it into the rp showing how Josh would be able to withstand the pain each could cause.

Yet you didn't go overboard with it, you allowed yourself to have some weaknesses and admitted that the pain you were enduring was nothing like what was going to happen during the match up.

Anyway, what do I know, I liked the rp and that's the only thing that matters.

[Josh Eagles]

Thanks

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I know I told you on MSN that I liked it, but I’ve got to keep appearances up that I’m reviewing everyone’s. It could also help others, so who knows.

I think the idea was absolutely solid and it’s a shame you didn’t get to play out the entire three part series. I have no problem in saying that if that was the case I’d have been fucked. You told me earlier in the week this was one of your best promo’s and I couldn’t help but agree, you took a cliché’d idea of ‘training for an opponent’ and made it incredibly unique. Brining Flap in and allowing him to be sadistic mutter futter really added a nice touch as I felt it brought the promo back to the idea of Josh fighting to re-capture the spotlight. The torture segments where nice, but near the end Josh’s reactions started to get a little repetitive. I liked them, but I felt changing it up nearer the start would’ve been more beneficial.

I didn’t think there was a real downside, a once over as a proof read would’ve been good, not just for the grammar and spelling, but there seemed to be some let downs at point where you just kind of stopped an idea.