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[Jeremy Sterling]

Match of the Night -
Moment of the Night -
What was missing -
How it can be improved -
Anything else -

Rating:

Really sorry about how late the results are, but hey, they were up by midnight in California. ;D

[Trav McBang!]

Match of the Night -

The main event. Congrats, James.

Moment of the Night -

Christian Kane scares a child! Secondly, THE GOD OF THUNDER RETURNS

What was missing -

The Krieg's youtube video

How it can be improved -

More cowbell. CK on commentary.

Anything else -
Good show, man. Can't wait to debut.

Rating:
8.5/10, guys. ^5

[Chris Strike]

Match of the Night - Main Event - very well written, people that are getting pushed got their BAMF screen time and James' win was well deserved.
Moment of the Night - Seriously...CK scaring the four-year old. That shit was hilarious!
What was missing - A few people showing up, but sometimes, guess can't be helped.
How it can be improved - Boots to head? Moar cowbell?
Anything else - Good beginning to what should hopefully be a long and healthy life to KoP! =D

Rating: 8.5/10

[____]

I'll review in the morning but fuck California dreamin'. I'm curious as t' 'Who Shot Ya.'

[Storm]

Match of the Night - Main Event. It was well written to keep readers involved despite the length, and though I was pretty sure Hart had it after reading his RPs my heart was pounding as I read it. And damn, I'm a monster >_>

Moment of the Night - CK fucking with the kid. I echo everyone else's sentiments.

What was missing - I feel like the card would have been really strengthened by one more undercard match, but I understand there wasn't really anyone to work with so that's not really anyone's fault.

How it can be improved - The only thing I would have changed is to open up with the Battle Royale and have Bruce's squash afterward. I think it would have felt more like an "authentic" wrestling show as it would have gotten the crowd started with something huge and allowed the winner (Storm, in this case) longer to rest, which they usually do in real shows when someone has to pull double duty.

The only other thing I picked up on was the timing in the Main Event. Like I said, it was a phenomally written match (and I'm not just saying that because of all the nods I got) but at one point they say "Storm has been in the match for over 20 minutes) and then a bit later the match ends at about 50 minutes. Now, maybe it was longer between the two then it seemed and it just flied in my head head cause of how well done it was, but I just recall after reading the result saying "Almost 30 minutes passed?" Doesn't take away from the match really, just something to watch for in the future since we do times at the ends of the matches here.

Anything else - Congratulations James, you deserved it. That "Valiant Champion" on top of your banner looks corny though :-p

Rating: 9/10

[B. Epic]

Match of the Night - Definitely the main event. Those Gauntlets are hell to write.
Moment of the Night - Congrats to Chris Hart. You've finally won the big one. Just make sure you keep that belt shined up real nice for me.
What was missing - Hard to say since this was the first show. This show has set the precedent for super cards in KoP, though.
How it can be improved - Honestly, I'm not one to complain. This is all just a game, and I'm happy to read it all the same.
Anything else - I don't know if you guys noticed it, but you mis-spelled "Annihilation" in the banner for the next show. Unless that was intentional, in which case, ignore this.

Rating: 9/10

[Josh Eagles]

Match of the Night - Main Event
Moment of the Night - I personally didn't have one.
What was missing - The segment that I sent in.
How it can be improved - No comments really, the writing was good.
Anything else - You could tell during the entire night via segs and storylines who was being pushed to win, it wasn't even a shock to see it. Making sure all segs make the card is a pretty good start of something as well. I also personally felt that the storyline of the gauntlet match did not reflect the roleplays at all. Just my personal opinion.

Rating: 7/10 - Writing was solid, continuity of the show just didn't fit for me.

[Trav McBang!]

Jeremy told me last night that he meant to have Eagles last longer...and the segments made it seem like CK was gonna dominate...but the only thing he dominated was a 4 year old's nightmares.

[Josh Eagles]

This actually has nothing to do with Josh being eliminated early. I felt the entire thing didn't fit ... but that's just my personal opinion, not a knock.

[tommyhargrove]

Match of the Night - The Main Event

Moment of the Night - Guess i'd have to go with CK and the Kid

What was missing - It would have been nice to see the RP's spread out a bit, instead of like 15 posted in a matter of a day and a half

How it can be improved - Not really sure, seemed like a good card to me, great way to introduce a new champion, that always seems to be the bread and butter of a federation, the crowning of the initial champion, and KOP did a fantastic job of it

Anything else - is it too early to ask for some type of sandbag rule to be implemented

Rating:
8.5 / 10

[____]

Match of the Night - Gauntlet Match. Pretty well done, the ending would've had me on the edge of my seat but eight MSN's of 'congratulations' spoiled it.
Moment of the Night - Me winning.
What was missing - Apparently Josh's segment. I also echo his thoughts on the Gauntlet as well, good idea, just doesn't 'work'.
How it can be improved - I don't think there was a lot of issues, especially considering it was a super card.
Anything else - Woo! Captain Metro!

Rating: 8/10

[Better Than Johnny Noble]

Match of the Night - My match. For doubly obvious reasons. ;D
Moment of the Night - James winning was too obvious >_> Lightening Strike crawling out of retirement I guess.
What was missing - My segments. I don't send you hundreds upon hundreds just for you to use two! . Also, TWEET TWEET! And Chris on commentary. WHY WAS MY COMMENTARY EDITED!?!?!?! >______________________>
How it can be improved - Get me to write all the commentary
Anything else - Plenty, I'm sure

Rating: 7.98765432101234567890987654321111111121